Thursday 17 December 2009
Monday 14 December 2009
Monday 7 December 2009
SHOOTING SCRIPT
· Victim- Danielle
· Girl 1 (Jade),(Main character)- Jade
· Girl 2 (Nita)- Nita
· Camera Woman- Jhenelle
· Extra- Killer
Film opens with a couple of seconds of a various amount of shots which are looking at the scenery and urban life around us.
The film then cuts to the scene where the girls are giggling.
Zoom in on just the three girls walking.
(All girls giggling, VERY LOUDLY!)
Jade- “That film was soooo good!”
(Everyone agrees)
Once this is said, the camera zooms out and just catches the killer, within the shot.
(Followed on by a few moments of silence)
Then it goes to a shot of the killers point of view.
Nita- “PICTURES!!”
(All girls giggle)
Camera cuts a long shot of the girls.
Danielle- “Take some on my phone.”
(Nita takes the phone out of Danielle’s hand)
When the pictures are being taken, the camera will cut to a point of view shot, of the camera, it even has the little blackout that the camera goes into while the picture is being taken, then it goes into a freeze shot of the girls.
Camera zooms in on the phone as it is passed through hand to hand. (Match on action.)
After this has happened, a point of view shot, from the killers point of view will come up, and show the killers hand put the phone towards his ear.
(Jade and Danielle start posing for the pictures that Nita is taking)
(Danielle’s phone starts vibrating with a close up of, ‘Unknown Number’)
(Nita passes it too Danielle)
Close-up of Danielle talking on the phone.
Danielle- “Hello”
(Sounding a bit unsure)
(Jade looks around a casually looks over her shoulder, and notices the ‘killer’ who is also on his phone and starts to watch him, will trying to match up what he is saying)
Killer- “You’re next”
(Danielle hurries to put the phone down, and puts it in her pocket/bag)
Match on match shot of the phone going into Danielle pocket/Bag
Jade- “Who’s that?”
(While still trying to make eye contact with the killer)
Danielle- “Errrrr I dunno, But… they said ‘your next’”
(Sounding very unsure of what is going on)
Nita- “Ohhhhh shut up and don’t be so silly, just get in the picture”
Long shot of the girls, while having the pictures
(Jade and Danielle stare at each other looking at bit sheepish, but soon brake out of it as soon at the first picture is taken, and start to giggle)
While Jade and Danielle looks at each other, there is a close up of the two girls faces.
(Nita takes the snaps with the ‘strange’ character in the background, WITHOUT realising it)
With a slight close up of the ‘killer’ but still get the girls within the shot.
(Danielle pulls out her a phone and realises the time)
Point of view shot from Danielle, looking at her phone.
Then zoom out from the phone, going into a high angle shot.
Danielle- “WOW is that the time, I’ve got to go.”
Jade “Where are you meeting your mum Dan?”
Point of view shot of jade trying to look at where the killer has got too.
Danielle- “In the upstairs car park, she said she’ll be there for about 6ish, but you know what she’s like, always there early.”
(Followed by a little giggle)
Jade- “Ok, you suuurre you’re gonna be alright?”
Danielle- “Yer yer yer…. Of course, I’ll see you all tomorrow”
(Danielle walks off gradually; a bit wary of what is going on around her)
Low angle shot of the killers foot stepping on the stairs, cross cutting to Danielle foot also stepping onto the step
(Jade and Nita walk off away from the stairs that Danielle is walking up)
(Both girls are looking back at the pictures that Nita has just taken, and notice a strange figure in the background)
Point of view shot from the killer’s point of view, watching Jade and Nita walk off, so he can grab his victim.
(Jade looks over her shoulder and sees the ‘stalker’ and shows that she is really really unsure of what is going on. But shudders it off)
Zoom out on the girls, so the audience can see all of the surroundings.
Jade- “Is it me, or has that man been following us all night”
Nita- “OOHHH don’t be silly”
(While shaking her head, but looking very unsure of herself)
Jade- “Nita I’ve got such a bad feeling about this, I’m really unsure”
Close up of the camera
(Nita’s still looking through the photos)
Nita- “Jade look!”
Zoom out onto the girls faces.
(Both girls suddenly look at the camera, pause, then look at each other)
Nita and Jade- DANIELLE!!
(While this is happening, the killer is after Danielle,
· Girl 1 (Jade),(Main character)- Jade
· Girl 2 (Nita)- Nita
· Camera Woman- Jhenelle
· Extra- Killer
Film opens with a couple of seconds of a various amount of shots which are looking at the scenery and urban life around us.
The film then cuts to the scene where the girls are giggling.
Zoom in on just the three girls walking.
(All girls giggling, VERY LOUDLY!)
Jade- “That film was soooo good!”
(Everyone agrees)
Once this is said, the camera zooms out and just catches the killer, within the shot.
(Followed on by a few moments of silence)
Then it goes to a shot of the killers point of view.
Nita- “PICTURES!!”
(All girls giggle)
Camera cuts a long shot of the girls.
Danielle- “Take some on my phone.”
(Nita takes the phone out of Danielle’s hand)
When the pictures are being taken, the camera will cut to a point of view shot, of the camera, it even has the little blackout that the camera goes into while the picture is being taken, then it goes into a freeze shot of the girls.
Camera zooms in on the phone as it is passed through hand to hand. (Match on action.)
After this has happened, a point of view shot, from the killers point of view will come up, and show the killers hand put the phone towards his ear.
(Jade and Danielle start posing for the pictures that Nita is taking)
(Danielle’s phone starts vibrating with a close up of, ‘Unknown Number’)
(Nita passes it too Danielle)
Close-up of Danielle talking on the phone.
Danielle- “Hello”
(Sounding a bit unsure)
(Jade looks around a casually looks over her shoulder, and notices the ‘killer’ who is also on his phone and starts to watch him, will trying to match up what he is saying)
Killer- “You’re next”
(Danielle hurries to put the phone down, and puts it in her pocket/bag)
Match on match shot of the phone going into Danielle pocket/Bag
Jade- “Who’s that?”
(While still trying to make eye contact with the killer)
Danielle- “Errrrr I dunno, But… they said ‘your next’”
(Sounding very unsure of what is going on)
Nita- “Ohhhhh shut up and don’t be so silly, just get in the picture”
Long shot of the girls, while having the pictures
(Jade and Danielle stare at each other looking at bit sheepish, but soon brake out of it as soon at the first picture is taken, and start to giggle)
While Jade and Danielle looks at each other, there is a close up of the two girls faces.
(Nita takes the snaps with the ‘strange’ character in the background, WITHOUT realising it)
With a slight close up of the ‘killer’ but still get the girls within the shot.
(Danielle pulls out her a phone and realises the time)
Point of view shot from Danielle, looking at her phone.
Then zoom out from the phone, going into a high angle shot.
Danielle- “WOW is that the time, I’ve got to go.”
Jade “Where are you meeting your mum Dan?”
Point of view shot of jade trying to look at where the killer has got too.
Danielle- “In the upstairs car park, she said she’ll be there for about 6ish, but you know what she’s like, always there early.”
(Followed by a little giggle)
Jade- “Ok, you suuurre you’re gonna be alright?”
Danielle- “Yer yer yer…. Of course, I’ll see you all tomorrow”
(Danielle walks off gradually; a bit wary of what is going on around her)
Low angle shot of the killers foot stepping on the stairs, cross cutting to Danielle foot also stepping onto the step
(Jade and Nita walk off away from the stairs that Danielle is walking up)
(Both girls are looking back at the pictures that Nita has just taken, and notice a strange figure in the background)
Point of view shot from the killer’s point of view, watching Jade and Nita walk off, so he can grab his victim.
(Jade looks over her shoulder and sees the ‘stalker’ and shows that she is really really unsure of what is going on. But shudders it off)
Zoom out on the girls, so the audience can see all of the surroundings.
Jade- “Is it me, or has that man been following us all night”
Nita- “OOHHH don’t be silly”
(While shaking her head, but looking very unsure of herself)
Jade- “Nita I’ve got such a bad feeling about this, I’m really unsure”
Close up of the camera
(Nita’s still looking through the photos)
Nita- “Jade look!”
Zoom out onto the girls faces.
(Both girls suddenly look at the camera, pause, then look at each other)
Nita and Jade- DANIELLE!!
(While this is happening, the killer is after Danielle,
SCRIPT
· Victim- Danielle Waites
· Girl 1 (Jade),(Main character)- Jade Timson-Proud
· Girl 2 (Nita)- Nita Jadeja
· Camera Woman- Jhenelle White
· Extra- Killer
(All girls giggling, VERY LOUDLY!)
Jade- “That film was soooo good!”
(Everyone agrees)
(Followed on by a few moments of silence)
Nita- “PICTURES!!”
(All girls giggle)
Danielle- “Take some on my phone.”
(Nita takes the phone out of Danielle’s hand)
(Jade and Danielle start posing for the pictures that Nita is taking)
(Danielle’s phone starts vibrating with a close up of, ‘Unknown Number’)
(Nita passes it too Danielle)
Danielle- “Hello”
(Sounding a bit unsure)
Killer- “You’re next”
(Danielle hurries to put the phone down, and puts it in her pocket/bag)
Jade- “Who’s that?”
Danielle- “Errrrr I dunno, But… they said ‘your next’”
(Sounding very unsure of what is going on)
Nita- “Ohhhhh shut up and don’t be so silly, just get in the picture”
(Jade and Danielle stare at each other looking at bit sheepish, but soon brake out of it as soon at the first picture is taken, and start to giggle)
(Nita takes the snaps with the ‘strange’ character in the background, WITHOUT realising it)
(Danielle pulls out her a phone and realises the time)
Danielle- “WOW is that the time, I’ve got to go.”
Jade “Where are you meeting your mum Dan?”
Danielle- “In the upstairs car park, she said she’ll be there for about 6ish, but you know what she’s like, always there early.”
(Followed by a little giggle)
Jade- “Ok, you sure you’re gonna be alright?”
Danielle- “Yer yer yer…. Of course, I’ll see you all tomorrow”
(Danielle walks off gradually; a bit wary of what is going on around her)
(Jade and Nita walk off away from the stairs that Danielle is walking up)
(Both girls are looking back at the pictures that Nita has just taken, and notice a strange figure in the background)
(Jade looks over her shoulder and sees the ‘stalker’ and shows that she is really really unsure of what is going on. But shudders it off)
Jade- “Is it me, or has that man been following us all night”
Nita- “OOHHH don’t be silly”
(While shaking her head, but looking very unsure of herself)
Jade- “Nita I’ve got such a bad feeling about this, I’m really unsure”
(Nita’s still looking through the photos)
Nita- “Jade look!”
(Both girls suddenly look at the camera, pause, then look at each other)
Nita and Jade- DANIELLE!!
· Girl 1 (Jade),(Main character)- Jade Timson-Proud
· Girl 2 (Nita)- Nita Jadeja
· Camera Woman- Jhenelle White
· Extra- Killer
(All girls giggling, VERY LOUDLY!)
Jade- “That film was soooo good!”
(Everyone agrees)
(Followed on by a few moments of silence)
Nita- “PICTURES!!”
(All girls giggle)
Danielle- “Take some on my phone.”
(Nita takes the phone out of Danielle’s hand)
(Jade and Danielle start posing for the pictures that Nita is taking)
(Danielle’s phone starts vibrating with a close up of, ‘Unknown Number’)
(Nita passes it too Danielle)
Danielle- “Hello”
(Sounding a bit unsure)
Killer- “You’re next”
(Danielle hurries to put the phone down, and puts it in her pocket/bag)
Jade- “Who’s that?”
Danielle- “Errrrr I dunno, But… they said ‘your next’”
(Sounding very unsure of what is going on)
Nita- “Ohhhhh shut up and don’t be so silly, just get in the picture”
(Jade and Danielle stare at each other looking at bit sheepish, but soon brake out of it as soon at the first picture is taken, and start to giggle)
(Nita takes the snaps with the ‘strange’ character in the background, WITHOUT realising it)
(Danielle pulls out her a phone and realises the time)
Danielle- “WOW is that the time, I’ve got to go.”
Jade “Where are you meeting your mum Dan?”
Danielle- “In the upstairs car park, she said she’ll be there for about 6ish, but you know what she’s like, always there early.”
(Followed by a little giggle)
Jade- “Ok, you sure you’re gonna be alright?”
Danielle- “Yer yer yer…. Of course, I’ll see you all tomorrow”
(Danielle walks off gradually; a bit wary of what is going on around her)
(Jade and Nita walk off away from the stairs that Danielle is walking up)
(Both girls are looking back at the pictures that Nita has just taken, and notice a strange figure in the background)
(Jade looks over her shoulder and sees the ‘stalker’ and shows that she is really really unsure of what is going on. But shudders it off)
Jade- “Is it me, or has that man been following us all night”
Nita- “OOHHH don’t be silly”
(While shaking her head, but looking very unsure of herself)
Jade- “Nita I’ve got such a bad feeling about this, I’m really unsure”
(Nita’s still looking through the photos)
Nita- “Jade look!”
(Both girls suddenly look at the camera, pause, then look at each other)
Nita and Jade- DANIELLE!!
PLANNING NOTES
Characters:
Nita – Girl 2 (supporting character)
Jade – Girl 1(main character)
Danielle – Girl 3 (victim)
Jhenelle - Director/Camera/Photographer
Liam (extra) – stalker
Equipment and Props
· Camera
· Cell phones
· Gun
Location:
The Brewery, Romford Car park
– We need permission to film here, so we have asked the Centre Management and have to get a letter from the teacher.
Filming Dates:
November 25th – Taking pictures of the surroundings for the first scene and we will be going through the whole piece, timing it and rehearsing.
November 27th – Final filming, we will try and shoot the whole opening or as much as we can.
Nita – Girl 2 (supporting character)
Jade – Girl 1(main character)
Danielle – Girl 3 (victim)
Jhenelle - Director/Camera/Photographer
Liam (extra) – stalker
Equipment and Props
· Camera
· Cell phones
· Gun
Location:
The Brewery, Romford Car park
– We need permission to film here, so we have asked the Centre Management and have to get a letter from the teacher.
Filming Dates:
November 25th – Taking pictures of the surroundings for the first scene and we will be going through the whole piece, timing it and rehearsing.
November 27th – Final filming, we will try and shoot the whole opening or as much as we can.
SYNOPSIS
The story is based around three girls and a stalker. The story starts with the girls coming out of the cinema, after having a good time. All three girls are excited and decided to take a few photographs to show what a good night they have had. Yet at the same time one of the three girls gets a phone call, whilst another girl relies that there is a man that has been following them who is also on the phone. She finds this a coincidence as he is also staring at the girl on the phone. The girl on the phone is a little worried as the person on the other end seems to be threatening her. Yet she puts the phone down and briefly tells the others girls how and what was one the phone.
All girls try to forget about it and go back into there girly, happy mood, and decided to take some photos. After doing so the girls depart and go in separate ways, two goes off whilst the girl on the phone goes of separately, up the stairs to the car park where she is supposedly meeting her mother. As she goes up the stairs the stalker follows, yet it’s too late for the other girls to release. The girl walking up the stairs notices somebody following her, so walks slightly faster.
After reaching the top she turns around and realises he's not there. At the same time the other two girls start to look back at the photos and notice the stalker in the background staring at the girl, who is alone. Also in the photographs they see the stalker pull out the gun. The girls decided to run back to the other girl to tell her what they have discovered.
Yet at the same time the victim, who realises the stalker is no longer following her, decides to make a run for it towards the car park door. As she reaches the door the stalker appears, panicking the victim, which results in her tripping, falling over and bumping her head. Her vision goes blurry and she can see a figure standing over her with a gun facing towards her. Everything goes blank and all you hear is gun shots.
Afterwards the two girls appear on the stairs still trying to catch up with their friend to warn her, when they freeze and one of them receives a text saying, “1 down 2 to go”.
All girls try to forget about it and go back into there girly, happy mood, and decided to take some photos. After doing so the girls depart and go in separate ways, two goes off whilst the girl on the phone goes of separately, up the stairs to the car park where she is supposedly meeting her mother. As she goes up the stairs the stalker follows, yet it’s too late for the other girls to release. The girl walking up the stairs notices somebody following her, so walks slightly faster.
After reaching the top she turns around and realises he's not there. At the same time the other two girls start to look back at the photos and notice the stalker in the background staring at the girl, who is alone. Also in the photographs they see the stalker pull out the gun. The girls decided to run back to the other girl to tell her what they have discovered.
Yet at the same time the victim, who realises the stalker is no longer following her, decides to make a run for it towards the car park door. As she reaches the door the stalker appears, panicking the victim, which results in her tripping, falling over and bumping her head. Her vision goes blurry and she can see a figure standing over her with a gun facing towards her. Everything goes blank and all you hear is gun shots.
Afterwards the two girls appear on the stairs still trying to catch up with their friend to warn her, when they freeze and one of them receives a text saying, “1 down 2 to go”.
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